Tornado Roads
This is another one of my late night poems, I didn't really finish it right in my opinion, but I'm short of inspiration to fix it Mornings are lonely on the highwaysWhen it reaches two oclockBut he...
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doesn't need fixing marc, it is fine the way it is, and I liked it very much. Everyone needs someone to care that we make it through the storms in life. This sums up those feelings very well, and the...
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a wonderful story of a sad and lonely lifestyle told here, marc ... I must agree with nea ... we all need someone to care that we've made it through life's storms ... it makes all the difference in...
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Ditto here, and flowed very nicely too. Geez, took me on that lonely road with him, and I must say, it was a forlorn feeling,,,"He cries himself to bed",,,,,it lingers with sadness.Patricia**See...
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MwkI agree.. its perfect the way it is... took me on the road with him too... i could visualize this... and feel it... it all flowed very nicely... great writing.. i enjoyed.. ~Mystic~"It's all right,...
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MWKThis was so well done. It made me feel the loneliness of the road. Becki
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Marc, this was a very interesting tale, and in my opinion I think very well told. The imagery was excellent....I felt I was right there in that 18-wheeler in the storm, could see the car pile-up, feel...
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Every day, heroes do heroic deeds with no one to mark them...whether that be driving all night just to keep a family fed and clothed, or working in the refugee camps to keep victims of trauma fed and...
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